Written in response to a challenge set at Poetry for the People: write a poem mentioning a walking stick. Perfomed at the ‘A Load of Poets’ open mic night at 1200 Postcards, Hastings on 8th February 2024 and at the Poetry for the People meeting at the Royal Victoria Hotel, Hastings on 9th February 2024.
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My Uncle Jack
Came back from Iraq
With a medal, a limp and a cane;
A dodgy right knee,
PTSD,
And a vague insurmountable pain.
He did not say a lot –
It was hot, he’d been shot –
And he kept himself to himself;
And his medal was hid
Out of reach of us kids
In a small metal box on a shelf.
He lived at our place
I remember his face
And the click of his stick on the floor;
He seemed to be in
Some battle within,
But he never mentioned the war.
Till his untimely end
The stick was his friend
It became an additional limb;
Like an extra joint
He’d use it to point
At the things that were just beyond him:
The tv remote,
His hat and his coat
An annoyingly speeding car;
Passers-by,
Stars in the sky,
Beers at the back of the bar.
He’d stare till he tired
At the glowing coal fire
His mood growing ever more black;
And when he was sick,
He’d talk to the stick;
Like a dog, it did not answer back
Now that he’s dead
What secrets he said
To the stick, we never will tell;
His will stipulated
That he be cremated
And the cane should go with him as well.
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